Monday, September 17, 2007

''Actress''

You know me.
Of course you know me!

I act like I don't care I pretend I don't know anything,
But under my skin beaneath what you see,
I know what I want, I know that I love,
And I know my best aset- is Me

Some people think they know everyone
because of the way they talk and look.
They think they know you
like a video or book.

But the dog I will adopt one day
knows more about me then they.

And if people judje or doubt you,
say they'd rather live without you,
why should I please them?

Hah!

I'd rather tease them, than give in to
their comments-thoughtless and brash
their ideas of friendship, wich border on trash.

Here is my secret:
To cope with your lies
I am an Actress-
and write my own lines!

9 comments:

Melody_Anderson said...

wow..this is wounderful. this is all about what goes on inside of a person that seems like..normal. but were all turbulate like that. its a nice reminder that were not alone.

candida said...

nice job i really like your picture. any way your play was fabolous keep writing.

Anonymous said...

This is good. Everyone has days where they are fake or feel like they are acting. I like how you compared everyone else looking at you to the dog you may soon adopt. very cool. Ryme fits this poem and keeps you reading.

Zoua said...

i like it...i like how you said that part about what others might say about you...i like that!!!

Charlie said...

I like some of the ryhmes and there was like 1 I was just like what? lol but I really like the ummmmm moral I guess of this poem I like how you say your an actress cause I've never thought of it that way before

Kaddy said...

This poem is really good. Its true that people judge people from how they look and a lot of people relate to that. I love the way its set-up.

Leanna said...

i love acting this poem does show that real you. good job

Your girl is in the house said...

That is such a beautiful poem. you make the reader want to read more.it is great.

Cheree said...

This reminds me of song lyrics. Nice job.