''Hi Betty, I'm sorry it's night but I really wanted you to meet Jenna''. said John
''Hi Jenna, I'm John's girlfriend, Betty.You must be John's sister?
John is this why you brought me to this retuerant?
''I'm sorry Betty but this is actually my fiance''. said John
"But I'm pregnate John," cried Betty.
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Wow! I like it because it has so much drama in such little time. It's funny how one conversation can change your life. Check it over for punctuation. It will create a better flow. other than that it makes sense and is pretty good!
this is like totally confrusing at the beginning..but once i read it a 2nd time then i got it...thats a cool story ya got there
WOW..I DIDNT EXPECT THAT TO HAPPEN. I LIKE HOW YOU DONT EXPECT THAT TO BE HIS FIANCE. GOOD JOB. I LIKE HOW U FIT SO MUCH INTO SUCH A SHORT STORY.
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