Monday, October 1, 2007

Final version

Who am I
Why do I feight to be someone I'm not?
Why can't I confront who I am?
I initiate but I feel like I need to be benefited by others.

What do you insinuate?
Should I face my enemy or
should I stay feeling like coward?
Sometimes people try to be formidable but to me they're just
another failure to themself and others.

Why are they trying to ''fit in''?
Is it not obviouse you can't be who you're not?
I hope one day you don't regret what your doing to yourself.

Don't interpret this wrong; it's easy to discard but not to forget.

2 comments:

mimi said...

I noticed that you added a few more lines to emphasize your point. I like it. Good job!

LindsayB said...

"Why do I feight to be someone I'm not." I abso. love that line and I also noticed that you added a few more lines after that. :) LOVEEEE ITT!