Monday, October 15, 2007

Final verion 55word story

The break up

''Hi John, What's the reason you brought me to this lovely restaurant?''said Betty. ''Betty, I'm sorry I brought you this late, but I have to tell you something important.'' ''What is it John?''
''I'm engaged to another girl. She's pregnant, you have to understand me. I 'm going to be a dad!
'' but I'm pregnant John.''

1 comment:

EMiLEE said...

I LIKE THE OTHER VERSION BETTER. THE 1ST VERSION WAS MORE UNEXPECTING. BUT I STILL LIKE HOW U WROTE IT..YOU STILL HAD ALL OF THE ASPECTS OF THE 1ST VERSION.